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the shortest ending by ~spokk:iconspokk:



this shore has reached the sea,
the sun and the moon cease to sea
each other again;
the curtain falls to the ground.
©2007-2008 ~spokk
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~AegisQuil:iconAegisQuil: Oct 13, 2007, 4:20:30 PM
isn't the second occurrence of sea meant to be see?

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Meep
~spokk:iconspokk: Oct 14, 2007, 4:05:06 AM
Nah, it's a poetic device. :P

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why are you looking here o. o
~NegativePenguin:iconNegativePenguin: Oct 14, 2007, 5:10:08 AM
Ahhh, I was going to say 'very poetic', but that's a given. Either way, I like it; ESPECIALLY the poetic device :P

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How do you find the truth
With eyes half-clouded by darkness?
How do you appreciate World's glory
When even the sun shines shades of grey?
~NegativePenguin:iconNegativePenguin: Oct 14, 2007, 5:10:14 AM
Ahhh, I was going to say 'very poetic', but that's a given. Either way, I like it; ESPECIALLY the poetic device :P

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How do you find the truth
With eyes half-clouded by darkness?
How do you appreciate World's glory
When even the sun shines shades of grey?
~NegativePenguin:iconNegativePenguin: Oct 14, 2007, 5:10:33 AM
Argh, it doubleposted

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How do you find the truth
With eyes half-clouded by darkness?
How do you appreciate World's glory
When even the sun shines shades of grey?
~spokk:iconspokk: Oct 16, 2007, 11:36:32 AM
Whoa double post. :P Thanks man. :)

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why are you looking here o. o